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R.1 Choose the sentence that adds the best descriptive detail

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What are descriptive details?

Descriptive details are words and phrases that help a reader form a clear picture in their mind. Writers use them to show how something looks, sounds, feels, smells, or tastes.

Examples:
  • The red apple was shiny and smooth. (sight, touch)
  • The puppy barked loudly at the mail carrier. (sound)
  • The sweet smell of cookies filled the kitchen. (smell)
Note

Descriptive details help bring writing to life by making it more interesting and easier to imagine.

Why are descriptive details important?

Writers use descriptive details to create stronger connections between the reader and the text. Details add depth, make characters and settings feel real, and allow readers to experience writing more fully.

Examples:
  • Without details: The dog ran.
  • With details: The fluffy brown dog sprinted quickly across the grassy field.
Note

Adding descriptive details makes writing clearer and more engaging for the reader.

How to add descriptive details

Writers can use descriptive details by focusing on the five senses and choosing vivid words that show instead of just telling.

Steps:
  • Ask: What do I see, hear, smell, taste, or feel?
  • Choose strong adjectives and verbs (not just “good,” “nice,” or “fun”).
  • Show details that matter to the reader.
Note

Descriptive writing is more powerful when you “show” with details rather than simply “tell.”

Common mistakes to avoid

Sometimes writers use too many details or unhelpful details that confuse the reader. It is important to use clear and meaningful descriptions.

Examples:
  • Too much: The dog, with shiny fur, bright eyes, a wagging tail, pointy ears, and sharp claws, ran very fast and barked loudly.
  • Just right: The dog with shiny fur barked as it raced across the yard.
Note

Use enough details to paint a picture, but not so many that your writing becomes hard to follow.

Using descriptive details in writing

Practice using descriptive details in full sentences and paragraphs. This will help you create stories and essays that are vivid, clear, and interesting to read.

Examples:
  • “The boy ate lunch.” → “The boy crunched into a crispy apple and unwrapped his sandwich.”
  • “The girl went outside.” → “The girl stepped outside into the chilly air and zipped up her jacket.”
Note

When you use descriptive details, your writing shows action and creates images that make readers want to keep reading.