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EE.1 Learn how to revise and rewrite sentences

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What does it mean to rewrite sentences?

Rewriting sentences means changing the way a sentence is written to make it clearer, stronger, or more correct. Writers often revise sentences to fix mistakes, add details, or improve word choice.

Examples:
  • Original: “The dog run.”
    Rewritten: “The dog runs fast.”
  • Original: “I like pizza it is good.”
    Rewritten: “I like pizza because it tastes good.”
Helpful hint

Think: “Can I make this sentence easier to read or more interesting?”

Why do we rewrite sentences?

We rewrite sentences to make our writing better. Sometimes a sentence is too short, too confusing, or has mistakes. By rewriting, we make sure our reader understands our ideas clearly.

Examples:
  • Original: “She play.”
    Rewritten: “She plays soccer with her friends.”
  • Original: “The cat is.”
    Rewritten: “The cat is sleeping on the couch.”
Helpful hint

Ask yourself: “Does this sentence tell the whole idea?” If not, rewrite it!

Ways to improve sentences

There are many ways to make a sentence better. You can add details, fix grammar, change word order, or combine short sentences into one strong sentence.

Examples:
  • Adding details: “The bird sang.” → “The blue bird sang a sweet song.”
  • Fixing grammar: “He go to school.” → “He goes to school.”
  • Combining sentences: “I like apples. I like oranges.” → “I like apples and oranges.”
Helpful hint

Good writers don’t just write once—they improve their sentences to make them the best they can be.

Putting it all together

When you revise and edit, you make your writing stronger. Rewriting sentences helps you share your ideas clearly, just like professional authors do.

Examples:
  • Original: “I went park.”
    Rewritten: “I went to the park with my brother and we played on the swings.”
  • Original: “It fun.”
    Rewritten: “It was fun to play soccer at recess today.”
Helpful hint

Remember: Rewriting makes your sentences clear, complete, and enjoyable for your reader.